Jan 14, 2014 21:37
10 yrs ago
Russian term
развернувшаяся вокруг
Russian to English
Other
Journalism
На первый взгляд, ситуация понятна и предсказуема. Однако череда корпоративных
конфликтов, развернувшаяся вокруг основных игроков этого рынка в последние
несколько лет, свидетельствует о попытках захвата львиной доли рынка одним игроком.
Русский оригинал безграмотный - "череда" не может развернуться, развернуться могут конфликты...
However, a series of corporate conflicts (disputes) over key players of this market [that occurred?] during the last several years illustrate the attempt to seize a lion's share of the market by one player...
конфликтов, развернувшаяся вокруг основных игроков этого рынка в последние
несколько лет, свидетельствует о попытках захвата львиной доли рынка одним игроком.
Русский оригинал безграмотный - "череда" не может развернуться, развернуться могут конфликты...
However, a series of corporate conflicts (disputes) over key players of this market [that occurred?] during the last several years illustrate the attempt to seize a lion's share of the market by one player...
Proposed translations
(English)
| 4 +3 | around (and omit the participle) |
Rachel Douglas
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| 4 +2 | involving |
ViBe
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| 4 | concerned with / concerning (pls. see) |
Michael Korovkin
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| 3 | revolving around |
Andrew Vdovin
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| 2 | evolving around |
Alexander Somin
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Change log
Jan 14, 2014 21:37: changed "Kudoz queue" from "In queue" to "Public"
Proposed translations
+3
18 hrs
Rachel Douglas
United States
United States
Native in English
Works in field
United States
Excellent English from Russian originals
Native in: English (Variants: British, Australian, US)
Works in: Russian to English
Related KudoZ points
:
96
Selected
around (and omit the participle)
It's fluent English to say "conflicts around", without adding "arising, revolving, centered on, involving," etc.
In many cases your "over" would be OK, too, except when the conflicts are around people, then "around" works better.
Also, possibly what you have here are more frequently called "corporate disputes" than "conflicts".
In many cases your "over" would be OK, too, except when the conflicts are around people, then "around" works better.
Also, possibly what you have here are more frequently called "corporate disputes" than "conflicts".
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thank you, Rachel!"
9 hrs
Alexander Somin
Native in Russian
Senior Quality Reviewer for TwB
Native in: Russian (Variant: Standard-Russia)
Works in: English to Russian, Yiddish to English, German to Russian, and 4 more.
evolving around
=
9 hrs
Andrew Vdovin
Native in Russian
Works in field
DELVING into DETAIL
Native in: Russian 
Works in: English to Russian, Russian, Russian to English, and 2 more.
Related KudoZ points
:
14
revolving around
All of our regional conflicts revolve around this resource. This is the realpolitik reason we have invested so much attention in the area. But is it ...
www.dancarlin.com/phpbb3/viewtopic.php?...
The central conflicts revolving around this boy include feelings of inadequacy in view of his father's expectations of masculinity. The father expects this boy to be ...
books.google.ru/books?isbn=0873950461
www.dancarlin.com/phpbb3/viewtopic.php?...
The central conflicts revolving around this boy include feelings of inadequacy in view of his father's expectations of masculinity. The father expects this boy to be ...
books.google.ru/books?isbn=0873950461
11 hrs
Michael Korovkin
Italy
Italy
Native in Russian
&
English
Specializes in field
Italy
Native in: English , Russian
Works in: Russian to English, English to Russian, Italian to Russian, and 2 more.
Related KudoZ points
:
28
concerned with / concerning (pls. see)
However, a series of corporate conflicts concerning the principal/main/key players of that market during the last several years, attest to an attempt .... etc....
+2
11 hrs
involving
involving
OR rephrase:
With (the) major market players drawn into a series of …, there are signs that …
OR rephrase:
With (the) major market players drawn into a series of …, there are signs that …
Peer comment(s):
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Zamira B.
5 hrs
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Thank you!
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| agree |
Alexandra Schneeuhr
: I'd vote for the 'rephrasing' option of yours
10 hrs
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Ευχαριστώ!
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